ColorComments.com reader Steven Purhonen (in the comments to Zion Lodge Stories) volunteered to read some of my other writing. Since the offer, and my acceptance, were here in ColorComments.com, I thought I would post the first chapter here too. I’m not sure if I’m going to post the rest or not. Maybe I’ll work it out with Steve.
In any case, here’s chapter 1 of The OMS.
Dan, I just now (Sunday, 27 Sep 09 @1419) uploaded the introductory material and the first chapter of “The OMS” to my beloved and trusty Palm Tungsten T5. I will pass along my impressions soon.
Thanks.
Okay Dan, send along the next chapter or two. I’m hooked. A measure of my “hookedness” is while I was reading it on my Palm I checked the Palm’s clock (always visible at the bottom of the page) only once; in other words I was very engrossed.
Thus far the technique I liked is sequential viewpoints of the three deer hunters. I must admit, being anal, at first you had made a miscue. It’s tough being me!
OK … but I’m going to send it via private email. After discussing this with some of my other friends, I’ve decided not to post the whole thing here. If anyone else wants to read it, they can contact me.
And … if you think you got it tough, you should try being me!!